I like your color schemes on all of them! they all work really well together. Your last poster has a cool idea with the tetris and it shows how they fit together, but i think that your other posters have more information for the viewers. And in your first one it has good movement which i think your second one lacks.
The first has the best color scheme but the third draws the most attention. I think that if you were to use this concept that you should make the outline of each block black so they do not take away what you are trying to get across to the viewer... the font. Also if you are going to go with the last one maybe add a little bit more size contrast to make the negative space look more interesting.
Hmmmmm i see that you changed the way your layouts looked on your page instead of all over the place. I guess you do care lol, but i think your strongest composition in the first one, The colors work well together, and there is a clear hierachy. The tetris one is nice, but i dont think it is for this project. I like to see the juices flowing. Keep up the good work girl! Sorry this comment is short, this is the third time im doing it. My other too were better, but im spending too much time on ya girl. Ha!
Even though I like the last the best, I think the first conveys the most information. The scale in the first helps to draw the viewers eyes to specific parts of your font. I think there are too many colors, which confuse the hierarchy. I like the colors more in the second. Maybe try taking out one or two colors in the first design or try putting the colors of the second into the first.
I like your color schemes on all of them! they all work really well together. Your last poster has a cool idea with the tetris and it shows how they fit together, but i think that your other posters have more information for the viewers. And in your first one it has good movement which i think your second one lacks.
ReplyDeleteThe first has the best color scheme but the third draws the most attention. I think that if you were to use this concept that you should make the outline of each block black so they do not take away what you are trying to get across to the viewer... the font. Also if you are going to go with the last one maybe add a little bit more size contrast to make the negative space look more interesting.
ReplyDeleteHmmmmm i see that you changed the way your layouts looked on your page instead of all over the place. I guess you do care lol, but i think your strongest composition in the first one, The colors work well together, and there is a clear hierachy. The tetris one is nice, but i dont think it is for this project. I like to see the juices flowing. Keep up the good work girl! Sorry this comment is short, this is the third time im doing it. My other too were better, but im spending too much time on ya girl. Ha!
ReplyDeleteEven though I like the last the best, I think the first conveys the most information. The scale in the first helps to draw the viewers eyes to specific parts of your font. I think there are too many colors, which confuse the hierarchy. I like the colors more in the second. Maybe try taking out one or two colors in the first design or try putting the colors of the second into the first.
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